

The only error I can see is “the data is” should be “the data are”. Stylistically I would also change utilizing to using, which conveys exactly the same meaning and is more accessible.
Otherwise I believe this is regular English. It’s ok to have difficulty comprehending language, but it’s more productive to ask questions about the parts you don’t understand.
Can I help with any specific questions?
Anything that people write is correct really, like language is created by anyone making sounds or patterns to share meaning.
Data is a plural though, seppo dominance using it as singular is changing it outside that miserable empire but it’s one of my hangups haha.